Sunday, October 23, 2011

Closed Reading #3

The 'Let Women Die' Bill - Ross Becht


      In this article, Ross Becht discusses the bill in women would be potentially forced to die, rather than abort their babies in the case of complications. In this article, Becht uses diction, syntax, and imagery to express his opinion on this bill.
      As soon as you begin the article, you can sense the tension and complete disgust in the idea of this bill by his choice of words. By using words such as refusing, unfortunately, and ridiculous to describe how he feels about thisbill Becht, is automatically setting the tone of the article.
     Another way we can understand Becht's point of view was his syntax. He easily got his point across by asking the readers questions and using phrases to express his view. Another way he uses syntax to make his point clear to the readers is by using long sentences with the most powerful piece of information at the end to shock his readers and influence them to have the same opinion that he does.
      Finally, the most effective thing that Becht uses to express his opinion is the strong and vivid images. Becht begins the article talking about his own personal experience with his wife and the hardships all women face either during or after pregnancy. This really allows the reader to embody the physical pain that these women go through leaving the reader feeling sympathetic. The strongest use of imagery is at the end of the article he starts three sentences with "As a ..." and follows each phrase with a reason why he is appalled when he is this certain type of person. By doing this we can see how different readers may react to this bill, based on their background.
     By chooisng what he put into his sentences and carefully picking his words and memories, Becht is able to influence his readers and make them see the error in this bill.

2 comments:

  1. I can definitely see your point here. However, as I mentioned before in another comment, you may want to try to be a bit more careful with your quotes. Even when choosing single words to analyze diction, you've got to be sure you quote everything. Also, give examples of syntax. You do a great job of listing certain sentence structures and explaining how they affect the reader. But you don't give a real example from the article. I think that would really help to improve this analysis. You really got the point of the article, and could benefit from just a few small changes.

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  2. Great job with this third Close Reading! Again, I find it enjoyable to read your entries as they are so different from what I’ve seen. I feel that you are getting the gist of the assignment, however if you wanted to add a little more depth to you analysis, consider adding more examples from the article or even adding some of your own reactions to show how the author’s intended effects came across to you.

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