Analysis of Fifth Business

author: 
Robertson Davies, born 1913, Canadian


Setting:
A small town in Canada named Deptford. Very quiet, but yet very gossipy. Also many places in Europe.


Summary:
 In Fifth Business  by  Roberston Davies, Dunstable Ramsey retells his life story to the current headmaster at the college he works at. Throughout this novel, Ramsey interacts with many different people and tries to analyze the lives of many saints. Ramsey ends up discovering not only who he is, but what his purpose is in life. Ramsey ultimately learns that he is the fifth business and hasn't lived his own life, but rather simply played a role in the lives of others. 


Plot
1. Snowball thrown by Boy hits Mrs. Dempster: Paul is born. The Ramsey family starts to care for the Dempster family.
2. Mrs. Dempster is missing and is later found with a tramp. Mrs. Ramsey and the rest of the town turn their backs on the Dempster family. 
3. Ramseys older brother Willie is severely sick and dies for a brief period of time. Ramsey freaks out and gets Mrs. Dempster who then prays at Willie's side and Willie is miraculously alive again. This sparks the idea of saints in Ramsey's head.
4. Ramsey goes to war and is shortly injured. While he is about to lose consciousness, he thinks he sees the face of Mary Dempster on a statue of Mary and Jesus.
5. Ramsey is nursed back to health by Diana and receives the Victoria Cross for his heroic actions.He denies Diana's idea of marriage and changes his name from Dunstable to Dunstan. He shortly returns home to realize Boy and Leola are to be wed, Paul has run away, Mrs. Dempster is in the care of a relative because of her sanity, and Mr. Dempster died.
6. Ramsey returns to college and becomes a teacher and he visits Europe and begins to learn more about the saints.
7. Ramsey finds Mary Dempster and sees Paul on stage in Europe with the travelling circus.
8. Dunstan moves Mrs. Dempster to a hospital for the insane. 
9. HE goes to Europe and meets Padre Blazon and they discuss saints and Ramsay's life. 
10. Leola tries to kill herself on Christmas and Ramsay then helps her recover.
11. Leola dies and Ramsay is denied the spot of Headmaster, and travels to Mexico and sees Paul Dempster again, but this time as Magnus Eisengrim. 
12. Ramsay accepts the offer of writing a biography for Paul, and befriends Liesel and has her become one of his confidants. Liesel brings it to his attention that he is actually the fifth business and that he hasnt been living his own life. 
13. Mary Dempster dies and shortly afterwords Boy is found dead with suspicion of foul play. 
14. Dunstan Ramsay then dies at Paul's show of a heart attack. 


significant characters:

-Dunstable Ramsey: (name changed to Dunstan: nickname Dunny or Ramsey) Ramsey is the main character of this novel. He grew up as kind of an outcast from caring for Mrs. Dempster. He went to war, did a "heroic" action and received the Victoria Cross. He becomes a college professor and studies saints and writes many books about them.He is unsure about God, but he is very spiritual. He helps and occasionally cares for Mrs. Dempster, Leoyla, Boy, Paul, and Amassa Dempster, at the end of the novel we learn that Ramsey is the fifth business. 
-Mary Dempster: The mother of Paul and wife of Amassa. She is viewed by the town as very simple, and at sometimes the devil. By Ramsey, she is viewed as a saint. She is seen as the sacred feminine (she preforms three miracles), as the mother figure (she listens and is lauded by Ramsey), and as the fool saint (she does good but does not show prudence). She eventually goes crazy in a mental institute once she receives word about her son being alive. 
-Liesel: Liesel is a strong woman who helps Paul in his magic show. She is one of the only people in the novel to know about Ramsey's entire life and forces him to look inside himself and realize his role in life. She is also one of the few people to match Ramsey intellectually. In the jungian perspective she is seen as the high priestess. 
-Padre Blazon: He is another character that matches Ramsey on an intellectual level. He helps him deal with the quest to know about saints and what makes a saint. 
-Boy Staunton: He is the ultimate business man and what would be known as the golden boy. He is successful, dominant, masculine, and a long time friend to Ramsey. Boy (originally Percy Boyd Staunton) was the one whose rock-snowball hit Mrs. Dempster starting off the whole novel. 
-Leoyla: She was the first love of Ramsey, and later the wife to Boy Staunton. As she tries to keep up with her husbands upward climb socially, she realizes she can no longer satisfy him both publicly and sexually. She tries to kill herself, is unsuccessful, but later dies of pneumonia. 
-Paul Dempster: He is the premature son of Amassa and Mary Dempster. He grows up in an awkward situation by being seen as an outcast by the other townspeople. He idolizes Ramsey growing up and learns many magic tricks from him. He runs away to the circus at a young age and eventually becomes a successful traveling magician in Europe named Magnus Eisengrim. 
-Amassa Dempster: He is viewed as an outcast for having a simple and demonic wife, and a strange child. 
-Mrs. Ramsey: She is one of the only people to show love to Mrs. Dempster at the beginning of the novel which also influences Ramsey to show affection for her. 
-Diana: She is the woman that helps bring Ramsey back after his war injury. She teaches him how to walk again and is seen as a mother figure in Ramsey's eyes. She originally wants to be married to Ramsey, but after he rejects the idea, they become very close friends. 

Narative voice/style/point of view/tone/imagery/symbolism:
Narrative voice: very heavy, influential, opnionated
point of view: First person
tone: simple
Imagery:vivid actions, very detailed, describes when
Symbolism:  the stone = fate/start-stop button/karma, name changing = rebirth of a new self/different period in life, victoria cross = shows that Ramsay is the hero model and not just fifth business


Quotes:

- "We are public icons, we two: he an icon of kingship, and I an icon of heroism, unreal yet very necessarry..." (page 77)
    This shows Ramsay's sense of discovery throughout his life and shows that although we know of his life as a fifth business, this proves that he could have been the hero role, but we don't know of the story that goes along with it. 
-"No, Ramsay, I wont promise anything of the sort...You are too old a man to believe in secrets. There is really no such thinf as a secret; everybody likes to ell, and everybody does tell." -Liesel (page 204)
      This quote shows how Liesel is both a confidant and of an equal level intellectually. This quote shows how Liesel causes Ramsay to see the truth in his own life and in life in general. 


Theme & Support:


Humanity is the author of its own story.
Claim 1: God's actions are done by humans and they are simply being viewed as holy or spiritual over time due to their recreations and re-occurrences. 
Claim 2: the human story is all about perspective in deciding what character role you are playing and depending on  who is looking at your role and in what story.

Analysis of Death of a Salesman

author: 

Arthur Miller born. Prominent playwright in America.

Setting:
late 1940s: Willy Loman's house, places in NYC


Summary:
This play looks into the life of a tragic man named Willy Loman. He is a man who has been striving for success and achieving the American dream, but has never been able to accomplish either of these goals. With his health deteriorating due to a lack of success, he has vivid hallucinations of past events where things were happier. In his weakened condition, Willy picks fights with his wife and two older sons.  His sons Biff and Happy are not successful as well, although both claim to try and make him happy. Biff and Willy constantly clash over the dispute of what Biff should do with his life, the city vs the country. Willy feels let down by Biff and constantly remembers when his life was going to be great. These flashbacks of times where the future looked promising, highlight the failure in Willy's life. Once the family convinces Willy that he has something to live for, the family goes to bed and Willy is "greeted" by his older brother once again telling him to go into the jungle and make something of himself. Willy is killed. The play ends at Willy's funeral with his wife Linda saying "We're free" due to their family being debt free finally.
      
Plot
Willy Loman comes home one night to his worried wife. Willy complains about driving back from his unsuccessful business trip. They discuss his failure, broken appliances, and debt. As they fight, Biff and Happy overhear. They then talk about their father's mental state and what they can do to please him. They then argue with Willy. Biff decides to go in for a job interview, and Willy decides to go talk to his boss. Willy is fired, and Biff is unsuccessful. Later when the three Loman men meet up for dinner, Willy is outraged at Biff's actions that day were unsuccessful and starts to have a flashback about when he cheated on his wife and Biff found out. Happy and Biff return to the household and are scolded by their mother Linda for disappointing their father. Later that evening when Willy returns home, Biff confronts Willy about him trying to kill himself. They both talk about their failures and tell each other that they love each other. After everyone is asleep, Willy is ushered by the hallucination of his older brother Ben to try and make something of himself. Willy goes out and is killed. The tragedy ends at Willy's funeral. 


significant characters:

Biff: Willy's oldest son, wants to be working with his hands and outdoors, conflicted between disappointing his father or disappointing himself. He had a bright future as a businessman/football player. He saw his dad cheating on his mom, and promptly lost all respect for him. He loses respect for him once again when he discovers that he wants to kill himself. Often steals items of worth and value because he feels that it makes him appear successful. 

Happy: The second son to Willy and Linda. He is always trying to live up to Biff, but is still not successful. He sleeps with betrothed women to feel affection. He doesnt put any effort into becoming a success. Tries to grab his parents attention by saying that he's going to loose weight and that he's been working out and that he will get married. 

Linda: Linda is Willy's wife and the mother to both Biff and Happy. She is the only one in the novel who truly understands Willy and is also the most realistic. She acts as a mother figure to Willy by babying him, defending his actions, and protecting him out of love. 

Willy: Willy is the main character. He is the salesman of the play. He has tried all his life to be successful, but has never succeded. Willy is not a stable character and is over dramatic. He changes to hopeful and happy to disappointed and angry in seconds. he often thinks of the past vividly and acts as if the past events were happening in real life. 

Uncle Ben: ben is Willy's older brother who went to the jungles of africa and became rich. He is an inspiration to Willy as well as a father figure. 

Charlie: Charlie is Willy's neighbor and a close friend. He tries to help Willy out financially, but he is pushed away by Willy's pride and vivid hallucinations. Charlie is considered to be a friend of Willy's.

Narative voice/style/point of view/tone/imagery/symbolism:
tone: shifts from overjoyed to overwhelmed and upset
Imagery: bright colors show happier times (which are often times of the past)
Symbolism:  the red corvette = youth/joy/success, the jungle = the city life/success


Quotes:
- "He's liked but he's not well liked" -Willy
    This shows Willy's materialistic views on the American dream and how hard work isn't as             important as good looks and natural charm
-"Figure it out. Work a lifetime to pay off a house. You finally own it, and there's nobody to live in it." - Willy
      This quote shows how Willy is not satisfied with his current life and wished that he could have had the opportunity to pay off his house sooner. This is also foreshadowing the end of the novel.  


.Theme & Support:
Not everyone can obtain the American dream.

Analysis of Pride and Prejudice

author: 

Jane Austen: 1775-1817, English novelist, feminist, wrote several novels. 

Setting:
In Hertfordshire, Meryton, Longbourne, and London, England in the 1800's. 


Summary:
This novel is about the 5 Bennet sisters and their trials and tribulations in and out of love. All of the sisters are to be married off in order to save themselves from destitution. At the first ball of the book, the 5 sisters meet Mr. Bingley and Mr. Darcy. The eldest daughter, Jane, and Mr. Bingley hit it off where as Mr. Darcy takes an interest in Elizabeth, but doesn't show it. The relationship between Mr. Bingley and Jane continues to grow, and Elizabeth and Darcy struggle to see eye to eye. Throughout the novel, we see the relationship of Elizabeth and Darcy to grow and the rest of the sisters form relationships of their own. Ultimately in the end Elizabeth and Darcy look past their pride and end up together. 


Plot
1. Mr. Bingley and Mr. Darcy meet the Bennet sisters. Jane becomes infatuated with each other and their relationship grows, Darcy and Elizabeth however do not get along.

2. Jane stays at the estate of Mr. Bingley and falls ill. Elizabeth rushes to her side and spends some more time with Mr. Darcy while there. 
3. Mr. Bennet's cousin Mr. Collins arrives in hopes of marrying one of the Bennet sisters. He pursues Elizabeth because Jane is technically spoken for. 
4. Elizabeth forms a realtionship with Wickham causing her disdain for Mr. Darcy to grow.
5. Mr Collins proposes to Elizabeth, she says no. Mr. Collins then asks the Bennet's family friend, Charlotte, to marry him - she accepts. Mr. Bingley leaves with his sister and Mr. Darcy leaving Jane devastated.
6. Elizabeth visits Charlotte and Mr. Collins and meets up with Mr. Darcy again and learns that he broke up Jane and Mr. Bingley and learns the truth of Mr. Wickham.
7. Elizabeth and her Aunt and Uncle visit the home of Mr. Darcy and recieve news that the youngest Bennet sister, Lydia, has run off with Mr. Wickham. 
8. Darcy smooths over the situation with Lydia and Mr. Wickham and the two are wed. 
9. Darcy's Aunt, Lady Catherine de Bourgh, confronts Elizabeth of the attraction between her and Mr. Darcy and claims for them  not to be wed.
10. All is resolved. Mr. Darcy and Elizabeth wed, and Jane and Mr. Bingley wed as well. 


Significant Characters:

Elizabeth Bennet: She is the second oldest Bennet sister and her father's favorite. She is very prideful and believes in living her life in her own way. She isn't fond of Darcy upon their first meeting, she then develops an attraction to Mr. Wickham, and is proposed to by Mr. Collins. She learns the truth of both Mr. Wickham and Mr. Darcy and feels herself being attracted to Mr. Darcy. In the end, she marries Mr. Darcy and ends up the wealthiest of all of the sisters.
Jane Bennet: The oldest of the Bennet sisters. She is very shy and modest and does not show affection as easily as most. She is closest to Elizabeth. She ends up marrying Mr. Bingley.
Mary Bennet: Mary is the middle Bennet sister and doesnt have any inclination to marry. She is an outcast from her two younger sisters because she thinks their antics are silly and childish. Mary is very intellectual and is seldom seem interacting in the book unless at home. 
Catherine Bennet: SHe is the second youngest Bennet daughter. She hangs out with Lydia mostly and dreams about settling down with a rich man. 
Lydia Bennet: She is the youngest of the Bennet sisters and the first to be married. She is naive and only wants to settle down with a rich man. She ends up running away with Mr. Wickham and is eventually married to him.
Mr. Bennet: Mr. Bennet is surrounded by women: his five daughters and his naggy wife. Mr. Bennet puts up with his wife's antics because she means well and because he has no energy to try and stop her. Mr. Bennet favors Jane because she is the most intellectual and has the ability to think for herself.
Mrs. Bennet: Mrs. Bennet is a meddlesome mother who dreams of having her daughters all married and financially stable. She enjoys gossiping and is very over dramatic. She wants her daughters to have the same views as she does which is why she is overjoyed and not upset when Lydia comes back married.
Mr. Darcy: Mr. Darcy is an awkward man and very close friend to Mr. Bingley. He has an attraction to Elizabeth but pushes it away because he is too prredjudiced against a woman of her class. He is also very prideful and has a hard time admiting his mistakes to Elizabeth and Mr. Bingley.
Mr. Bingley: He is a close friend to Mr. Darcy and listens to everything Mr. Darcy says. Mr. Bingley is very timid and has an immediate attraction to Jane. Darcy convinces him that the marriage is based off of money alone, and Mr. Bingley backs out. Mr Bingley eventually marries Jane after hearing of Mr. Darcy's mistake.
Mr. Wickham: He once was a family friend of the Darcy family. He is very greedy and is always looking for money. He tried to elope with Mr. Darcy's younger sister, had an attraction to Elizabeth, and ends up running away with Lydia and marrying her  in return for a hefty sum from Mr. Darcy.
Mr. Collins: Mr. Collins is Mr. Bennets cousin. He visits in hope of marrying one of the Bennet sisters. He originally wants Jane, but is then directed to Elizabeth. After he proposes to her and she rejects him, he ends up marrying Charlotte.
Charlotte Lucas: Close family friends to the Bennet family. Closest to Elizabeth and Jane. Ends up marrying Mr. Collins in fear of never having another opportunity.

Narative voice/style/point of view/tone/imagery/symbolism:
tone: light, descriptive - remains constant throughout the novel
point of view: Limited Omniscient: told by Elizabeth
Imagery: describes the actions of people and the levels of class
Symbols: eyes = a sign of interest, emotion, constantly used in moments between Darcy/Elizabeth


Quotes:
- "Its a truth universally acknowledged, that a single man in possession of a good fortune, must be in want of a wife" (page 1)
    This sets the mood of the entire work. This shows how society and especially the women in it react to wealth and the different levels of classes. This sets up the precedent that the more money you are the more well liked you will be and explains the action of many female characters in this book.
-"With a strong prejudice against every thing he might say, she began with his account of what had happened at Netherfield." (page 138)
      This quote shows how Elizabeth starts to question her judgings of Mr. Darcy and begins to question her prejudice against him.


Theme & Support:
People's opinions of people can easily be changed whether it be changed by one's actions or a reflection of one's pride and actions.Claim 1: Elizabeth's actions throughout the novel change when  she reviews her own actions and overlooks the true nature of Mr. Darcy.
Claim 2:  Many relationships/marriages may stay constant or change for better or worse. 

Analysis of Hamlet

author: 

William Shakespeare 1564-1616, famous playwright in England, world renowned 

Setting:
Elsinore, Denmark 



Summary:
This play is about a prince, Hamlet, who returns from his stay at school to see that his father has been killed and his mother has remarried to his uncle. Hamlet meets the ghost of his father and finds out about the truth of his death and is asked to kill his own uncle. Throughout the entire novel, Hamlet debates whether or not to kill his uncle or whether to believe the ghosts accusations. All hell breaks loose and the palace of Elsinore slowly turns into a slaughter house  as the late Hamlet is avenged and many accidental deaths happen in the process.


Plot
1. The gaurds and Horatio see the Ghost of the late Hamlet and decide to inform Hamlet himself. He is told and the Ghost tells Hamlet that he was murdered by his brother and to avenge his death by killing his uncle.
2. Laertes leaves for France but not before giving some brotherly advice to Ophelia and receiving some fatherly advice. Polonius warns Ophelia of Hamlet. Shortly Ophelia tells her father of Hamlet's estranged behavior.
3. Polonius tells King Claudius and Gertrude of Hamlet's behavior and the king sends for Rosencratz and Guildenstern to find the cause of Hamlet's insanity.
4. Hamlet is betrayed by Ophelia when they meet and Polonius and Claudius listen to their conversation.
5. Hamlet asks the players to perform a play similar to the situation in Elsinore and watches the Kings behavior as they watch the play. Claudius loses his cool and Hamlet sees that the Ghost must have been telling the truth.
6. Hamlet confronts Gertrude for her incestuous actions Thinking that the King was behind the curtains Hamlet stabs the body, and accidentally kills Polonius. The Ghost appears again and Gertrude promises to help Hamlet.  
7. Hamlet is sent to England with Rosencrantz and Guildenstern. The two friends have a letter from the King saying that Hamlet is to be killed. Their ship is attacked by pirates and Hamlet is on his way back to Denmark. Laertes returns to deal with his fathers death and sister's madness. He blames Hamlet.
8. Ophelia commits suicide by throwing herself into a river. Upon her burial Laertes throws himself into her grave who is then followed by the returned Hamlet. Claudius then suggests a fencing match between the two. The king has a secret plan with Laertes to cheat and use poison both on the sword tip and in a cup meant for Hamlet.
9. The two battle. Hamlet is wounded by the sword laced with posion and then wounds Laertes with the same sword. Gertrude drinks the poison meant for Hamlet and dies. Laertes dies and warns Hamlet of Claudius' actions. Hamlet then kills Claudius.
10. Hamlet tells Horatio to pass on his story, and names Fortinbras the kind of Denmark. Hamlet dies. 


significant characters:

Hamlet: The main character in the play. He is in his thirties. He is the son to the late King Hamlet and Gertrude. He is nephew to Claudius. He is a very intelligent man who can talk very quickly and is talented in the department of very witty rhetoric. His closest friend is Horatio, and he was having relations with Ophelia. Throughout the play he struggles to go against the societal limits.
Ghost of Hamlet's father: A loved and noble king. Husband to Gertrude, father to Hamlet, and brother of Claudius. Killed by Claudius by receiving poison through the ear. He asks his son to kill his brother Claudius so he can rest.
Gertrude: Wife to the late Hamlet, but current wife to King Claudius. Mother to Hamlet. She is accused of committing incestuous acts and betraying her first husband.
Claudius: The current King of Denmark. He is brother to the late Hamlet, husband of Gertrude, and uncle to young Hamlet. He killed his brother and then took over the throne.
Polonius: He is a lord and adviser to King Claudius. He is also father to Ophelia and Laertes. 
Laertes: Son of Polonius, brother to Ophelia.Ophelia: Daughter of Polonius, sister to Laertes, lover of Hamlet. She eventually loses her mind and commits suicide. 
Horatio: Hamlet's trusted friend. He is the only character to remain loyal throughout the entire play.
Rosencrantz/Guildenstern: They are childhood friends of Hamlet. They are mistaken for each other multiple times in the play and are simply there to push the plot along. They are the fifth business of the play.
Fortinbras: He is the Prince of Norway and eventually takes the throne of Denmark at the end of the play.

Quotes:
- "To be, or not to be: that is the question..." -Hamlet
    This shows Hamlet's constant questioning over the point of living and death itself. 
-"Now might I do it pat, now he is praying; and so am I revenged..." - Hamlet
      This quote shows how Hamlet struggles with the idea of killing his own uncle. This quote also shows how Hamlet struggles with the religious rules of his society and his inner desires.


Theme & Support:
A single action can cause a landslide of actions.Claim 1: Every action is intertwined.
Claim 2: Every player is important.

Analysis of The American Dream

author: 

Edward Albee

Setting:
the apartment of Mommy and Daddy


Summary:
This play looks into the differences of the two american dreams; one regarding the old and authentic american dream and the other regarding the current materialistic american dream. The play starts with Mommy, Daddy and Grandma talking and arguing about the evenings upcoming events and grandma's boxes. When there guest arrives we see more strange behavior and look into the lives of both the contrasting generations and the contrasting dreams. As the play continues we see that Mommy is the one in charge, Daddy has next to no power, and Grandma is the one with the most sense playing as a satirical guide throughout this play. We learn about Mommy and Daddy's child and its upbringing and more about Grandma's opinions of everything. At the end of the play a young man enters the picture and is thought to be Mommy and Daddy's long lost adopted son. He is the ideal man of the time both successful and picture perfect. The young man enters as Grandma leaves the picture for good and 


significant characters:

Mommy: She is the daughter to Grandma. She is petty, immature, and is the most masculine being in the family.

Daddy: He is the husband of Mommy and lacks all essences of masculinity. He is often made un of and compared to a child.
Grandma: SHe is the smartest in the novel and has a solid understanding of what is important in both life and dreams. She can be seen as both masculine and feminine. She represetns the classic and true american dream.

Mrs. Barker: She works with mommy and is apparently very important  in their world. She is very confused in the play and was originally the basket woman who delivered the child of MOmmy and Daddy.

The Young Man: he is the ideal man in their society, someone who appears to be successful (but actually isn't). he is supposed to be the long lost adopted son of Mommy and Daddy. He represents the new materialistic version of the american dream.

Narative voice/style/point of view/tone/imagery/symbolism:
motifs: boxes, baskets, satisfaction, old people, consumerism
Imagery: the absurd events that take place to show that this in fact is not an ordinary family. 


Quotes:
- "Don't be to sure; it's every man for himself around this place" -Grandma
    This quote shows the reality of the new dream and the loss of morals from generation to generation. This highlights Grandma's hatred of the current dream.
-"Then it turned out it only had eyes for it's daddy." -Grandma
      This quote shows how Mommy is the more masculine figure in the household demanding the attention be on her. THis quote also shows the unrealistic aspects of this play and Albees focus on their baby.


.Theme & Support:
Views can alter from generation to generation.
Claim 1: Grandma's sense of work versus Mommy's sense of work
Claim 2: The lifestyle of Mommy Daddy and Mrs. Barker in comparison to Grandma.

Synthesis of Course Materials

After thinking about everything I have done for the first 50 minutes of my day at school and the wee hours of the night trying to finish my work, I realize that it can be broken down into four broad yet basic categories: class discussions, annotating, improving essays, and understanding the main idea. 

(This is a DIDLS free entry. Yes it is important but every other response to course materials has listed DIDLS. What was said in past posts is still relevant, but it is not as necessary to write about because these elements have become second nature to me by now.)

Class Discussions
  If there is one thing the class discussions has taught me is to be quick on my feet, which is harder than it sounds at such an unreasonable time in the morning. The topics often change rapidly that I have a hard time interjecting my two sense into the discussion. As we continue to discuss as a class, I feel that I have not only gotten better at finding the right time to speak, but also putting in thought provoking ideas which can branch out to new discussions. I have come to love class discussions because I enjoy hearing other people points of view and being able to discuss with them why they see things the way they do. The best part of these discussions in my opinion is when everyone adds a little to a main idea, and the class as a whole comes up with a generalization about the piece of work. This has taught me to look at others ideas, take them  into consideration, and decide how they fit in with my current thought.

Annotating
  When I say to people that I have to annotate a book for homework, most people cringe. However, I secretly enjoy annotating. I  like being able to write on the pages and take note of things that are important. I feel that this also helps with my understanding of the piece because I am a very visual person. Whats great about annotating is that it really forces you to read every thing the author is giving you. When reading the first time, so many things can be missed or overlooked as arbitrary details, but when doing a second read/annotating, when you have a basic understanding of the plot, connections, comparisons, and conclusions can  easily be made.

Improving Essays

  Essays, can be very intimidating when looking at the prompt, but this year I've learned to really understand the prompt before I start writing my essay. I remember getting half way through a prompt at the beginning of the year and realizing that I was answering a completely different question. I learned the hard way to really look at the prompt and figure out what I need to pull from the text and what inferences I need to make. While revising my essays the past few days, I was a bit proud of my introductions and theses. I felt that this year my theses have improved immensely in comparison to prior english classes.

Understanding the Main Idea
  In every prompt and discussion, we end up talking about the piece of work as a whole. I've been used to looking at fragments or thinking about how this one aspect can relate to another, but never really looked into connecting everything into one giant idea. All of these have forced me to look at how these different elements of each poem, play or novel we read are so delicately intertwined with each other in the piece of work resulting in one stream of ideas.

the end.

Revision to Open Prompt #5

1988. Choose a distinguished novel or play in which some of the most significant events are mental or psychological; for example, awakenings, discoveries, changes in consciousness. In a well-organized essay, describe how the author manages to give these internal events the sense of excitement, suspense, and climax usually associated with external action. Do not merely summarize the plot.

       Waking up after a very vivid dream can be very disturbing, that is, until we realize that it was only a dream and everything is okay. But what if you couldn't distinguish the difference between reality and these vivid occurrences? In the play a "Death of a Salesmen" by Arthur Miller, the main character Willy often goes into very vivid flashbacks allowing the audience to understand Willy's struggle and constant strive for perfection and an overall feeling of success. 

       Willy Lowman seems like an average man, until you observe his actions for more than a couple of minutes. One minute Willy is over-the-moon extatic, and the next minute he is screaming and yelling. But these are not the strangest of his actions. The strangest is when Willy begins to talk to himself about the past or repeats his words from very intense moments in his life and imagine that these moments are happening over again. Although these actions are not always kept inside of Willy's head, the hallucinations and flashbacks are purely a creation of Willy's mind. 

       Miller uses these "internal events" to shape the entire plot of the play. When Willy sees, thinks, or hears about something that reminds him of a past event, he automatically segues into a memory. In the beginning of the play, when Willy is talking about driving, he starts to think about the past. He thinks of the red car, Biff and Happy's youth, and successful business days. Then, later on in the play, when Willy is talking to Biff and Happy at the restaurant with their dates about Biff's current failure, Willy is reminded of Biff discovering Willy's affair. This shapes the play by tying the current issues of the play with the issues of the past allowing the reader to understand the tribulations of both Willy's life and his family's life. 

      These "internal events" put a great deal of strain on Willy, and allow us to understand the breakdown of this man. We see both the up and downs in his life and realize that even in his happiest moments, he still is not successful. These events cause the reader to visualize the events in his life and how they have influenced the present day Willy Lowman. Because Miller puts in these events, and because they are often the most dramatic parts of the play, we are able to look further into the mind of Willy Lowman and see how this man has died before reaching success. 




Original: Open Prompt #5